Having Intended to Merely Pick on an Oil Company, the Poem Goes Awry
Never before have I so resembled British Petroleum.
They—it?—are concerned about the environment.
I—it?—am concerned about the environment.
They—him?—convey their concern through commercials,
in which a man talks softly about the importance
of the Earth. I—doodad?—convey my concern
through poems, in which my fingers type softly
about the importance of the Earth. They—oligarchs?—
have painted their slogans green. I—ineffectual
left-leaning emotional black-hole of a self-semaphore?—
recycle. Isn’t a corporation technically a person
and responsible? Aren’t I technically a person
and responsible? In a legal sense, in a regal sense,
if romanticism holds sway? To give you a feel
for how soft his voice is, imagine a kitty
that eats only felt wearing a sable coat on a bed
of dandelion fluff under sheets of the foreskins
of seraphim, that’s how soothingly they want to drill
in Alaska, in your head, just in case. And let’s be honest,
we mostly want them to, we mostly want to get to the bank
by two so we can get out of town by three and beat
the traffic, traffic is murder, this time of year.
How far would you walk for bread? For the flour
to make bread? A yard, a mile, a year, a life?
Now you ask me, when are you going to fix your bike
and ride it to work? Past the plain horses
and spotted cows and the spotted horses and plain cows,
along the river, to the left of the fallen-down barn
and the right of the falling-down barn, up the hill,
through the Pentecostal bend and past the Methodist
edifice, through the speed trap, beside the art gallery
and cigar shop, past the tattoo parlor and the bar
and the other bar and the other other bar and the other
other other bar and the bar that closed, where I swear,
al-anon meets, since I’m wondering, what is the value
of the wick or wire of soul, be it emotional
or notional, now that oceans are wheezing to a stop?
Bob Hicok
This poem first appeared in New Ohio Review and was reprinted in Best American Poetry 2011. Poem copyright 2011 Bob Hicok, all rights reserved, used by permission of the author.
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This motionpoem is presented in collaboration with Best American Poetry 2011 (Scribner), with thanks to David Lehman, series editor.
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Captions by video artist Joanna Kohler.

Pete, the main talent, gets his naked feet shot in the grass of the yard. This is meant to look like a nighttime shot. We shot it this way and then flipped the image in post to look like the camera is Pete’s perspective.

Here’s Mike Hartzel getting ready to grab shots of the cow the moment she may give us something useful.
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Oh, this is a super idea! The poem itself is visceral–in its quiet way! Then! together with your camera and music we are heart-struck. May I submit a poem? Huh? May I? Pleeze?
Thanks, Charlotte! As much as we’d like to work with everyone, we have taken the strategic route: working only through select poetry publishers to find new material. But your enthusiasm is your gift to us today. Cheers!
Your poem was a gift to me this morning… it speaks softly to my own lefty anxieties and love of cows and I’m left pondering just what the meek will inherit.